Audience Feedback of Final Video

I showed the final video to my class that is on YouTube to get audience feedback as I wasn't too sure about the beginning, end and a few of the new shots that I had included.

• The shot at the end is too long, but I like that she finishes where she started.

• Good editing and match on action
• Good actor
• Good use of setting
• Lip syncing is good
• Maybe too zoomed in where she is outside the house

• Good use of shots
• Mood swings change with the song which I like, (tempo and lyrics)
• Change of outfits is good
• Bailey's appearance :D
• Happy ending, they are all back where they belong.

• Good use of cuts and effects
• Well timed
• Music in sync with the video and moods

• Maybe too much use of the same effect unless this was planned as a running theme
• Good effect of the windows scene
• Good use of slow motions
• Like the different costumes
• Love the bath scene

• Prefered the original opening with less cuts as it starts slower
• Better to save the flashbacks for later on?
• Opacity still needs work
• Odd transition with mad Jessi
• Don't like the "pony" shot - too random
• Maybe have a 3rd jump cut with Bailey
• Final shot of mad Jessi needed? Definitely too long

• Like the use of multiple angles and leggings
• flashback as if she is remembering who she is
• like how she starts with the narrative then starts to sing
• You have to watch the video many times in order to catch everything so this means that the audience will want to watch it many times (repeatability factor)!
• Good use of shots of her going on to the roof
• Like the ending - shows that this is the different parts of her.

• Really good establishing shot
• Love the scenes where she is in the garden i.e the swing
• Love the bit where she is in the sheets - looks to innocent!
• Great use of costume changes
• Love the lighting effects/slow motion shots of her running
• Looks so effective as she being raised on top of the building
• Love the ending when she is on the bed with Bailey, however I'm not too keen on the last scene of her back in the box - you want a happy ending - or maybe it is just too long.