3rd Cut of the Video

Here is the final rough cut of my video, I haven't completely finished it yet because I want to conduct some audience feedback on a few clips that I'm not too sure of.



Kim almost finished from Caroline Birks on Vimeo.

Here are thoughts that I want to consider
I'm not sure whether I like the initial flashback (2nd shot) and if it suits the set up of the video.
I want to know what people think about:

• the other flashbacks in genereal
• the bath scene
• the different roof clips
• if I have enough clips as I only have around 60 and I've realised that Jessie J's music videos range from 110-320.
• The ending - whether it should end with Crazy Jessie in the box or a happier ending with the flashback Jessie on the bed with the dog.
• Whether I need to include the piano scene

To do this, I might create a questionnaire that I will give out to my friends, family and the people in my class.