Audience Feedback of 2nd Cut

Today in class, we showed eachother our music videos so far so that we could gain comments from one another. The comments that I recieved included:

• good range of shots
• the song really matches the genre and your choice of character for your artist
• your outfit changing run is amazing.
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• love the jump cuts at the start as she's in the box.
• you still need to include that black shot as she throws her coat that you spoke about
• she lays on her front then her back however this looks quite good
• opacity needs tweaking a bit as they look at one another through the glass
• love the bit as she runs in the corridor
• again very convincing - going to be an excellent video overall.
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• good use of literal lyrics
• good costume changes - they have real meaning
• like how she walked towards the camera and sings when she's "Crazy Jessie"
• really good ending at the moment when she runs to camera
• like the change of costume as she runs towards camera at the end
• good use of editing programme features
• lipsyncing is very well done
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• good quick shots and angels
• good effects
• may need a few more shots of her not singing
• you need a few more effects.

I was very happy with my audience feedback and will hope to do this again once I have completed my music video. The most popular shot seems to be when she runs towards the camera and her outfit changes, what I like about it is that I have times her limbs to be in the same place as she changes between 'characters' and costumes. What I need to improve on seems to adding and playing around with the effects some more which I will do for the next cut of my video.